Hmm
It does have that thinking feeling to it that i guess invention has but it felt kind of weak at times in terms instrumentation. Also the violin sounds to much like a synth to me for it to fit with the other two instruments
Hmm
It does have that thinking feeling to it that i guess invention has but it felt kind of weak at times in terms instrumentation. Also the violin sounds to much like a synth to me for it to fit with the other two instruments
The instrumentation was kind of intentionally limited.
My samples are cheap, not a whole lot to be done.
Further, it's worth noting that 'invention' refers to a specific type of composition.
I wanted this to go somewhere
I felt like it was building up but it never got there and it made me sad because this didnt come out of the well crafted shell that you made. Idk it just needed to go somewhere. Maybe a little more reworking and it could be a great song!
thanks for the review. In the future, I'll try to give my songs more of a climax.
Sounds really good
This sounds really good one the song really kicks in past just the piano playing. I give this an 8 because for me the piano by itself is a bit annoying. im not sure what it is about that reverb but it bugs me
The reverb is weird. I'll admit.
But thanks for the 8 =]. Still very much appreciated
Wow
This is so well thought out and it sounds absolutely amazing. If this is your music is consistently this good i would say you have a career in movies ahead of you if you dont already do. great job!
Can only hope so.
um ok
um its an interesting idea i guess but that high pitched sound you used is really grating and hard to listen to. loops well though
some interesting ideas
i think this has potential but as possibly an idea to make it sound less electronic and more hip hop maybe replace that first instrument with like a pop orchestra string feel. this is just a suggestion because personally it feels like that should be a string part. of course idk if the program you used even has a good sounding midi orchestra.
hahaha yeah im def gonna fix that and i might take the shaker out in some parts maybe maybe not dunno it'll all come together thanks for the review man.
much love
its alright
its ok but not great. the beat seems to get off and the main melody seems to be all over the place but it has its moments
This is good
This is really good but i dont mean to bag on the singer but he gets kind of whiny at times which doesnt work for me so much but i like the song overall
I am a bit of a whiner I suppose. We will be submitting some heavier songs soon with less crying in 'em. Thanks for the feedback!
not so relaxing
I have to agree with Aleczacool, it has a bit of a scary feeling rather than a relaxing feeling which is what i get when you say "relax and enjoy." it loops very well and i can see this being in a video game like when they are in a tunnel or cave or some dark place.
This is really good!
But I feel like there is something missing. Maybe there should be some singing involved?
i was thinking about that maybe ill do a vocal version later
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